Lesson Eleven: Feedback on what is left to complete.

This lesson consisted of us looking at what wasn't clear within our body of work. After talking to a member of staff I then went on to create the textile sample below to show how this garment could be constructed. And what it would be made up of, so it would give a clearer message.

I have also spent the time, making my journal stronger having looked at a number of fashion and textile designers, below is a select few, I have found really influencing.

I have also had another go at developing my E-portfolio pages, and I think I am now happier with the results as I think that they have more structure and are clearer to read.

Lesson Ten: Reviewing Design Development and Planning Portfolio Pages.

This lesson was really constructive, I felt that the feedback I was given was really relevant and helpful. I had all ready done a large body of work, but having someone else look at it helped me see different areas I was missing.

I have drawn my final collection up again as, it wasn't really reflecting the textiles side of the word twisted, i have done these illustrations in a collage technique having actually taken photographs of the samples in my sketchbook and photo copied them.

These are my final six which I think now look more relevant to the rest of my work:

I have also managed to do my portfolio pages, dispite my lack in knowledge in Photoshop, so I am really happy with the results, I am planning to have my teacher review them before printing in A3 as, there maybe elements I can improve on and haven't noticed myself.